Saturday, 4 August 2012

Downstream she went along

Downstream she went along
To find him at his favorite spot
Watching the sun set slowly
While lost in his own thought

She always wondered about him
What is it that he sees there
What draws him to the place
Into the sun why does he stare

She remembered all their talks
Of a future bright and beautiful
The stream flowing by the house
A picture they painted vivid and wonderful

She asked him about his habit
Of sitting downstream every evening
And he would just smile and say
Its the part of their being

So today she sat besides him
And watched the sun go down
And enjoyed the lovely sight it made
Like the stream's end wearing a crown

And then she understood it
All the things he didn't ever say
She felt it with the breeze
And in the way the trees sway

She sighed ever so slowly
Then she sang her favorite song
The smile crept across his face
And downstream they went along

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The origin of was this poem was the most unlikely... Somehow during a chat among friends, we all veered to a discussion about downstream processes and downstream reports.

To break away from the work-related talks, I just took the word 'downstream' and came up with the last paragraph of this poem. Egged on by the positive response of my friends, I made it into a poem :-)

So a big THANK YOU to all my friends, first of all and foremost to HK, the primary source of getting me to stop being lazy and start posting on the blog again. Lady you really rock and truly serve as an inspiration to me everyday. She is working hard to create awareness about Celiac disease in India. You can find more information from her at Celiac Desi

HK also did made this superb pic to put on the blog, which by her own account is also her wallpaper.

P.S. - I don't know to whom the image copyright belongs to. If you happen to know, do convey my regards to the copyright holder and also if you can share the contact details, I would be much obliged.


18 comments:

  1. Good poem, liked the wording and rhythm .......

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    1. Welcome to my blog and Thanks for the inspiration Ambar

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  2. Awesome meaningful poem! Keep it going...

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  3. Too cute...why do I feel that I have read this before? Was this one of your college time ke poems?

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    1. Hey Thanks Srini. Well you have read it before. Though it aint a college time poem. It was sent to you a few weeks back :-)

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  4. Hi,

    First of all thank you so much for dropping by my blog and enjoying my poetry. Today, I was curious and found my way to your blog. Loved the 'Downstream' poem, very vivid, real :) God bless.

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    1. Hi Ismita,

      Thank you for your comment. It serves as an inspiration for me :-)

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  5. I love the way you made a monotonous thing into a beautiful poem. The word has now more poetic vibrations than that of work. Thanks for sharing the poem and the way it came up.

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    1. Thank you for your kinds words of encouragement Saru :-)

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  6. A happy friendship day to you too :)

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    1. Hey thanks Ritika... and my apologies for the delay in getting back to you

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  7. Silence speaks more than words :)

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    1. very well said Philo... and you know that well dont you

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  8. Waiting for your next post Nikhil. : )

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